Legend_Gamer_3073

Too much basketball oriented...Need a bit of romance since it's a harem it needs a good buildup so it's better to start romance early and also Slice of life portion could be good too

Will you continue writing on your own??

what's bro gonna do?? Call yveltal??? Julian can call Kyogre then there's Zekrom and Reshiram and even if that's a problem Mewtwo could pummel everything in 5 mins

don't have 7 chaps for 7 matches...finish it within 2-3 chaps....And you can keep this relationship if you want but a famous female character might be good..I would also lave to see the dynamics in Indian house if he marries both

Do whatever you like...But maybe make him have 2 girls...It will be interesting to to see 2 wives in an Indian household together

I have been searching for a book like this...Hope you don't drop it and can you release more chapters ...Like it could be good if you could do a mass release at first for like atleast 10 chapters then go slow like 2 chapters a day or something but giving a few more chapters at first will seriously gain some interest and also if the smut starts not to late...

Will this be a Harem???

author can you add Anabel form battle frontier as a female lead??? She is such a nice girl and xould be great if you could potray her like Sabrina as she also has a special ability...

Bro you should include Anabel in the journey...She is an absolute gem of a character and a girl...The real epitome of perfect Wife...For me she surely is the best girl in this fic...so if you can pls include her in the next region or atleast increase her screen time more....