Herman_Pretorius

at the very least use your common sense, how tf can he do 100 floors and only have 900 total extraction points?! what tf did het even extract, smoke bombs? stats still the same, no new abilities or gear! useless! ep should be well over 5000 with all those endless waves, yet he gained only about 500ep? you say you use a sheet for the ep, is it the same sheet that 6year old learned to write on?

Positives: The story is interesting and i enjoy the evolution system. The two worlds thing has potential and the different undead are a nice touch. Negatives: The pacing is just horrible, there is no need to explain every single thing in such detail and please stop praising the mc about everything, we get it, he is the best. Many comments are about the pacing and unnecessary details, just listem to the readers, or this novel will die a slow death.

I think the author is doing an excellent job, they obviously like each other and breaking away from the usual fighting and scheming is refreshing.

this is probably the best book ever written. the characters are well defined and are relatable. Nephis seems to be the actual hero, but having Sunnys' point of view is brilliant.

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this book is the best by far, even topping shadow slave imo. love it

overall a good read, and the comedy is quite entertaining. what i just cannot seem to grasp is wtf happened with the diamond boxes and the end of chap 159? where does ot say what they got?

This book does not get the credit it deserves. The writer is very consistent, does a lot of research and brings several characters to life in a sensible and believable way. I would recommend this book to anyone, especially rpg players. The world building is excellent and the mc is truly human, i.e. he makes mistakes and is not omniscient or unbeatable.

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