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I love it and, but it needs more work on the story give details on what the characters are wearing and where they stand next to each other, if there are emotions like love or sadness. what I felt as I am reading that the main character is blunt and shows anger, but the rest of the characters just gives me mute emotions like they don't really have any. I so wanted there to be emotions because it calls READ me and enjoy me, I can show you more than anything in the whole world, other than not many emotions. it was very good and i must have more
I got lost in the story and fell in love with everyone. I want more to this story which to the author don't stop writing and keep up the good work.
I fell in love with this story with the emotions running thought each character and I would love the author to show this more :) Give little bit more details and I still recommend this wonderful story it still has me wanting to cry
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I love this story it is a good and I want more to this story. I love how everyone is acting together. I would recommend this story to anyone. [img=recommend] keep on writing