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It was a very good book for someone your age, the chapter where you described the reactions of Nigerians to the situation was funny, but don't you think it was a bit stereotypical to think that Africans wouldn't be able to find the problem? I also feel like the characters could use a whole lot of development, for example what was Erik's motivation, what was dark laboratories really, who is the protagonist, and what is his/her backstory, I think this book has the potential to become waayyy bigger than what it is now, just a few touches here and there and you are ready to go! You're going places!!