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I'm really confused what is the main world.

Can you make paragraphs smaller?

Uzumaki's have more potent chakra, meaning their chakra is stronger than others not larger. The clan with large chakra pools is Senju.

His personality as a whole is like a villan that has the advantages of being the protagonist. I honestly can't remember, I was tired when reading this last night. It just was annoying me, sorry if this was rude or disrespectful. Maybe people will disagree but I just found his character infuriating. I wish you the best of success on this fic, once again sorry if it came off as me being a dick.

isn't that all mtl? Why comment, it's just pointing out the obvious.

Honestly, I think the mc is annoying. He acts like a villan from a fantasy manhwa. It's worst than mtl stories. The only upside is writing quality. This is my true opinion, no disrespect.

Paragraphs are way too long.

Please don't, it just wouldn't fit. I love this fic, while I do enjoy the random harem fics it wouldn't fit this fic.

The pill?

With longer hair and blue eyes.

Amazing. Truly impressed with how he still has some of Klaus's personality yet has his own as a new person. I hope to see this not be given up like every other tvd/originals fic.

Amazing. Truly impressed with how he still has some of Klaus's personality yet has his own as a new person. I hope to see this not be given up like every other tvd/originals fic, thanks for the chapter.

Loser.

You think the village would allow that? Shika won't defect. Plus Edo Tensei is forbidden for a reason.

fax

Not in Naruto, well maybe a couple. But how would that even be useful in the timeline he is in. Numbers mean nothing in the coming arcs, it would only fit if it was set during the waring states period or around the sannins age to be useful.

because of shika

It's overused, and who would he use it on? Because jounin ninja will eventually be not useable.