Made_ln_Abyss

Thankyou for the chapters

Ong dude. Thanks for recommending me this novel. i appreciate it, truly.

Binged this till chapter 504 in a few days. After ShadowSlave, this is the webnovel i would be looking forward to the most. It really has everything you need in a perfect story no joke. i first thought it would be another Author's POV clone but its so so much better than that just from the ideas this author have. its very much inspired by ShadowSlave in certain things but you dont have to worry about it because its uniquely different to it in the aspects its inspired from which i appreciate. My friend ASG666 rec'd me this because he said the romance in this one has proper angst, misery and emotional rollercoaster, the main reason i started this novel. And yes i was extremely satisfied with what the author cooked here in regards to romance. its also slow and building up with lots of twist and turns and as a veteran romance reader i approve of its peak potential. But, surprisingly all the other elements of the novel; story, powersystem, characters, worldbuilding and fights are done GREAT, enough to be called this a true underrated novel. Truly, this isnt one of avg trash webnovels u see on this app everyday, this is a complete epic in the making. Release schedule is also decent, 7 chps per week. i truly hope author finishes this novel. As for criticisms. i have a two; 1-) the first 0-50 chps would make you feel like you are reading slop. There are so many grammatical and dialogue mistakes which iam sure author will proofread and correct later. 2-) Author have this bad habit of breaking the 4th wall in a random monologues which throws me out of my immersion and makes me cringe. Thankfully this happens very rarely after every 100 chapters only i think. May not be an issue for other readers but i personally hate it. Overall even apart from minor writing mistakes, i give it a 10/10. Even tho i could've deducted stars in writing quality because of the first 80 chps, i wont, because i am just so happy that i read this. Has the potential to become a literary masterpiece if Author finishes it. One of my most enjoyable reads. Really took a risk diving into this novel which has so less reviews and views but as usual you cant judge a book by its cover or in this novel's case, its first 80 chapters. Because the payoff here after that is soo good you wont ever regret investing yourself in this peak. Got into it craving peak romance and got more than that. Sigh.. now i would have to stack this novel also for months, just like i stack shadowslave. fuckkk

binged this in a few days. what a ride. i hope you finish writing this novel. this is peak

wtf is this meme lmao

i came back after reading your comment and i too eat my thoughts. lmfao

One of my favorite novels. Not objectively superior in writing but one of those Novels that has an actual soul unlike the slop you read nowadays. You will really feel this novel. Thankyou Resurgent♥️

thanks for completing this

Honestly valid take. That will definitly happen but i think in canon, before Nephis trying to make up for lost time, there could be a major fallout between Sunphis (not permemant breakup).. it would be better for more angst and emotional feel. (i like dramas xD)

Ofcourse "more" Nephis POV content is better and you can rewrite it and explain her monologues a bit "longer" in length. But i personally think the direction you took with Nephis POV is satisfactory