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This chapter is a repeat of the previous one

As long as that's the case. I just wish you had clarified that it won't happen until later. Not revealing WHEN he will realize just how powerful he really is. But at least say it would be gradual. I'm willing to give another chance to this story because I'm actually interested in the plot and character.

ok I'm not going to read if you keep changing things without warning. you had it in the wishes that he could use his pack's abilities for a limited time. there was nothing about a "howl" ability.

Again it's "Let's Hunt"

Axel literally said that it's "Axel Let's hunt" so why did you put "Axel Call the alpha"?

Nooroo is male though I thought

was about to say that it should be Izanagi

oh not him...

I have a question does Felix exist and were both of them created using the peacock like in canon?

Particularly SPD