I’m excited to see where the fanfic goes! And maybe as your writing the Pokémon fight scenes, adding a little more with how the Pokémon are preforming those moves or how they execute those moves to add a little more flavor to the fight scenes. Also author you are doing a great job!! Keep up the good work!!

DUDE!!! Love the concept of the story so far and I’m glad that this isn’t a typical MCU fanfic and the MC has an actual back story!! Keep up the great work author!!

Glad you’ve decided to keep going author!!! You are doing so great and I think the way you portray Jon is very good!!

Honestly was one of the best ASOIAF stories out there but because people didn’t understand that this was a Fanfic they got dissatisfied with the current story so those people can f right off!!! Author you are a fantastic author and I follow your other stories and never let these people that only spend time tearing others down to fill there so called pride. Hope you continue this later on in the future and sorry you had to take those comments and anything else!! Keep up your writing because you will go so far with it!!!

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YOOOOOO!!! Simple chapter but super deep! Loved it. also this is a dope fanfic so far author keep up the great work!!

Hopefully this dune fanfic updates more unlike other new ones but overall great job author keep up the good work!!

I’m loving this fic keep up the great work author!!!

I’m excited to see where this fanfic goes!! Keep up the great work author

Like the crystal onix would be so cool!!!

Loving this fic so far and paired with the new movies coming out and the classic dune books are my favorite so good work so far author and I can’t wait for more!! Hope this fic goes far!!

Yes a black and gold elikid