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WaNNaB9dCommentedAs far as I understand, the God of the Bow will be a god of a maximum of 3-2 levels, because his concept is too weak
He searched for a pin and pricked his finger, letting a drop of blood fall onto the bow. Nothing happened for a few moments, and he was about to give up and leave when he noticed that the mark on his forehead started to glow brightly. Golden lines on his forehead shone as a mysterious voice echoed around him, "Archery God 9 trials start. 1st trial, reach level 40 in 4 months."- WaNNaB9dReplied to Fatedouluo666
Apparently the author forgot about the influence of attributes
As Hun Yu practiced his skills, he felt a renewed sense of determination. He was determined to become the best Spirit Master he could be, and he was willing to put in the hard work to achieve his goals. - WaNNaB9dCommented
Let me remind you that he is currently about 20 years old and he has just broken through the 20th rank.... what kind of genius are we talking about? Or is it referring to his rapid progress since the beginning of training?
My master looked at me and smiled. "You're a true prodigy," he said. "With your talent and your spirit, you have the potential to become the greatest spirit master on the Douluo Continent." - WaNNaB9dCommented
Did he absorb the ring in a second or something?
Hun Yu focused his energy, feeling the spirit ring enter his body. He let out a triumphant roar as he felt his power increase exponentially. He opened his eyes and looked at Master Yun with a mix of satisfaction and anger. - WaNNaB9dReplied to JTGTitan_96
Just an old man-tsundere
The old man raised an eyebrow, looking impressed despite himself. "Well done, Hun Yu," he said grudgingly. "It seems you have exceeded my expectations. But do not let this momentary success go to your head. The path to mastery is long and difficult, and I will not tolerate anything less than your best effort." - WaNNaB11mthCommentedCh 112 In-Between 5
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White Tiger
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Already the 50th chapter, and the plot of the fanfiction is moving like a turtle, I hope later there will be accelerations or timeskips, because it becomes boring to read such everyday life and detail.
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I wonder if Dumbledore is a Legilimency master in this fanfic?
'Hmm, Professor McGonagall must have talked about me to him too' I mused to myself, 'And I didn't feel any bad intentions coming from him. It just confirms the fact that he's not the evil Dumbledore' - WaNNaB1yrCommented
In this fanfic, the timeline is very confused, because as I noticed Hizashi was born just now, but the 2nd Shinobi World War began 14 years before the canon, since Hishashi will have time to become a 30-38 year old man (there is a picture on the Internet )?
Meet Kizashi Haruno, my younger brother by seven years, making him one. - WaNNaB1yrCommented
breakthrough*
{WIND STYLE: GREAT BEARKTROUGH} - WaNNaB1yrCommented
So he entered the hidden village to kill people with bad karma, but even in fact he didn’t get anything from it? Why didn't he go to get some techs, information, money, weapons, or at least gear?
"Yuki! we are leaving out work is done here" Sanemi called out to Yuki and who promptly came running towards him and then both of them left. - WaNNaB1yrReplied to LuciferSign133
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Name: Bakorio Uchiha. - WaNNaB1yrCommented[Day 7: You break through to the second-star Dou Ancestor and are very satisfied with the Demon Poison Spot in your body. After exiting from the closed-door cultivation, you find that Xiao Yi Xian has broken through to the four-star Dou Ancestor.
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All the women of the main characters of Chinese novels are so lucky for all sorts of physiques or eyes, for example, in which they can enclose magical beasts and suck out their power, right?
"Triple Jade-Green Snake Flower Pupils? This little girl has a bit of luck". Yao Tian Huo commented, with a hint of surprise in his voice. He had traveled the Continent for an unknown number of years and had undoubtedly heard of this type of physique, it's a rare and powerful special physique. - WaNNaB1yrCommented
Also, here the MC has to sit for a whole year and absorb the Heavenly Flame, which is unrealistically difficult for a minute, and she just needs to eat poisonous grass. Is she a cow or something? Why did it take the main character 4 years of painstaking work to break through to Emperor Dou, and she spent 2 months in an excommunication after absorbing the Heavenly Flame? The main character absorbed 2 or 3 flames, which were saturated with fire energy for a long time and eventually got a breakthrough of 6-7 stars, and I repeat again, she absorbed One Flame and broke through to the Emperor. No, I remember about her physique, but that it was so unbalanced? As one YouTuber used to say when playing among us, "Kick in the balance"!
Xiao Yi Xian couldn't help but chuckle coquettishly as she heard Xiao Ming's words of admiration. She knew that her special physique was a major factor in her ability to break through to a higher level than him. "Hmph, it's not like you don't know my physique". She said playfully, "As long as the supply of poisonous herbs is sufficient, there won't be any bottleneck for me. Besides, in the past year I've also encountered many opportunities that helped me improve even more." - WaNNaB1yrCommented
Можно вопрос? Почему во всех китайских новеллах только у женщин есть такие телосложения? Скажите мне хотя бы одного мужского персонажа с особым телосложением, которому нужно просто что-то сожрать и не иметь узких мест! Правильно таких - нет! А почему? А потому, что Они девочки....
Xiao Yi Xian couldn't help but chuckle coquettishly as she heard Xiao Ming's words of admiration. She knew that her special physique was a major factor in her ability to break through to a higher level than him. "Hmph, it's not like you don't know my physique". She said playfully, "As long as the supply of poisonous herbs is sufficient, there won't be any bottleneck for me. Besides, in the past year I've also encountered many opportunities that helped me improve even more."