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Would be better to first use the devil fruit then take the pill 💊?

You are brave as author, because this story is going against what many would have wanted. There are many questions, like why he did nothing at all. Seams so weird! Well hope you can withstand the opposing opinions. That aside, i thought he would have done something. I did enjoy that you have gone with a different timeline, having him start before Harry Potter becomes the Boy who lived.

Though this weakness is usually referred to as the inability to swim, more accurately Devil Fruit users become helpless after being submerged in any kind of still water, not just seawater, because any body of water can be considered an extension of the "sea". The inability to move their body in the sea is simply a byproduct of that weakness so if you are strong enough you will be able to move.

Decided to post what wrote, its little over 100 thousand words, so around 50 chapters. Enjoy!

I have to say, i really enjoyed the first part of this story. Then it took a turn and you sidelined your own mc for other characters. This has´t been a story about Ned the Master of Mystic Arts for many chapters. What are you doing? is the question i must ask.

First of all, this is a fun story. I really enjoy reading it. But that price is way to much, maybe if it was 700 million i could buy it but more then ope ope no mi, that feels way to much. The story is great, you have entrained me very much! Keep up the good work!

I really enjoy this story, its very entertaining and its fun to read. The main character is fun and interesting, there are some struggles but the main character comes out on top. I recommend it!

This chapter was great, hopefully more is coming!

Getting my Star wars fix from fans these days. I enjoyed what you have written so far, looking forward to see more. Keep up the fun writing!

I learned something for this, i do not like attention. It makes me feel really uncomfortable. Every time i open up this webpage use to be fun, but now i dread it. Not that's not on you. But i have decided to stop posting on all my stories. I had around 100 thousand words written on this story, but i am just going to be a reader and not an writer. Thank you for helping me realize that. Have good weekend!