Sorry dear friend I'm pretty sure that everyone in Mas's camp hit 100 loyalty when he produced 4 rank 6 summons a few chapters back!

I know how hard it is to juggle all that except for the 4 languages Personally I applaud your efforts and am humbled by your dedication! You are a great author and I don't believe anyone else has the right to say otherwise

To the author the story line is awesome but seriously are you really that lazy! You're using a third to half of your required word count on messages before and after the few paragraphs you call a chapter If all your stories are going to be like this then you will have probably lost more than a few customers You are basically ripping us off, we have to pay for chapters and are paying a rate of three chapters just to get one Have more pride as a writer and less greed. You are an amazing author and most of us would much prefer to pay a hair more for full chapters especially if the storyline is as good or better than this one! Constructive criticism not hate, nor ridicule I promise Please keep writing because in my humble opinion, while I've read thousands of books since I was 4, you're story drew me right in and won't let me go!

This is a great book so far , and I believe it will continue to be so. I only have one request , I understand the need to promote your book but I believe that you should write slightly longer chapters 9 out of every 10, and only promote on every 10th chapter. everyone reading this obviously believes that it's good so repeating your promotion is a little redundant. Again this is just my opinion but I believe this book is good enough on its own that once out of every 10 would be good though truthfully you could probably get away with once every 30-40. Either way you arrean excellent writer and I look forward to reading more from you!!!!