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FFS! They were separated and we read about her stupid friends even in the epilogue chapter... Now I really believe the author of this book can't write couple scenes. The book ended without a decent communication between them, literally. That was exactly what I was afraid of. It was such an abrupt and terrible ending.
So she shamelessly watched them, and even though Bartos was there, huh? This is a blatant disrespect to your partner. Furthermore, she sees no problem with that. And we are expected to find her shamelessness cute. lol
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We don't even know what Ravina feels about Malachi. There is just a sexual attraction between them and sexualizing two characters too much kills the romance(if there was any). And this situation is further confirming my feelings that Ravina just tolerates him because she has no other choice. Seriously, in just a few chapters we felt the passion and the beginning of a love between Ravina and Ares(which is still a bad decision for the story for me). The author was able to deliver it to us. But with Malachi, all we have is just sexual attraction all this time. I don't get it.
The love between Ares and Ravina was a really bad decision in this novel and it ruined the whole story for me. They still have feelings for each other and it makes the whole relationship with Malachi pointless. It feels like Ares is the secret male lead and he is much more interesting than Malachi. I don't know if Malachi intentionally written blandly. Like this is Ares and Ravina's story, and Malachi is just a side character. I think if you ask Ravina at any point that if she would prefer to be with Ares from the beginning rather than Malachi, she always would say yes. And I don't think her answer will ever change. The same thing applies to Ares as well. Ares' shadow still looming over her relationship with Malachi and Malachi is just someone forced on her and it will always be like that. She just tolerates him. I feel like we are still reading about two lovers who didn't get to be together. I can't forget about that while reading the intimate moments between Malachi and Ravina. Because you don't act like that if your partner still thinking about someone else. You would be heartbroken.
I don't know if the author is doing it consciously but Vernon became a complete idiot and a little abusive. He wasn't the brightest to begin with. He gets angry for the slightest thing and yelling at Chloe who is a woman with trauma. He is betting against her with her own freedom, even if he will not do it in the end. What king of mindset is this? It's a story where the male lead doesn't deserve the female lead now, really.
Prolonging a story too much is never good. It was okay until we got close to the end. Then absurdity and stupidity increased gradually. We read about stupid Ruiling and idiot Bojing instead of Mingshen and Jia. Seriously, I don't get it. Mingshen and Jia are such important characters but they are the only ones who didn't get a blossoming love and an ending.
It was tolerable until the sexual abuse under the guise of being drunk. Well, he wasn't an interesting character anyway. Seriously, I don't know what it is with these authors on this site. Most of the stories I read include abusive male leads. Why are you evoking disgust against your main characters in love stories? I don't get it.