THEL0SE4

Read up to chapter 4. easily deserves 4 or 5 stars. the chapters feel really good. they flow naturally and are coherent. from what i can see, no ai(gen) was used... which is sadly rare on this site. only critiques i have are the main character and the first chapters perspectives. the mc feels a bit too si-ish/vague? which is fine, but i usually like it better when the main character has more thoughts and feelings written(might get better in the next chapters, idk). and the first chapter was a bit confusing. I'd recommend giving this fic a try. ps:Please turn mary into a brisket.

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why? he didn't get hit or use mana?

Hopefully, at sup-saiyan-werewolf-ceo level....jk

Don't*

his stats doesn't match...in the 'for fun' chapter her has 3 chuunin, 1 low and 1 high chuunin stats. with his age being 10(probably more cannon accurate). did he get rusty in 2 years or something?

they are edo tensei-ing his butt as soon as he dies from old age 💀

second*?

tftc

ok. As far as i can see, this story is either ai generated or assisted. Reasons: 1- inconsistent time skips(a tutor that is paid for a year teaches the character for 4 years... no explanation. nothing. 2-Inconsistent plot(blind spots to the 6 eyes...how? and reasoning, at one chapter, it's written that mc can use goddes magic very well because he is one hundred percent sure that she exists. The next chapter says that he can use it well because he is grateful? How? why? 3-How chapters feel, especially the end of the chapters. 4- inconsistent wording, some words that make it seem like something else that hasn't happened happen. ex: the magic tutor 'witnesses' the exam. even though she did the exam(this is the example that came to my mind, there are other) 5- Glaring use of adverbs of manner. ex: quickly, quietly, efficiently. they are fine to use, of course. but the way they are used are random. at one chapter, the six eyes are absolute in mana perception. the other has it fail. the f*ck is the point of six eyes if he can be blinded? 6-The last point, the perspectives change... a lot. at one sentence, we see stuff from mcs view, and the next sentence has a third person perspective. and vice versa. cool concept, nonexistent personality, and ai. i give the story 2/10.