Ryuga899

I think you should fix the points system make Gu worms higher points value like rank 1 10 points, rank 2 100 points, rank 3 1000 points rank 4 points, 10,000 and rank 5 points 100,000. So you can make Fang yuan work harder for points because the point system is too unbalance making it too easy for him and having avatar summon as servant should have him suspicious and unnecessary but everything else is fine and great that just my opinion it’s yours story on how you want to write it.

This for sure

Great work, also what are like the power levels like since both one piece x dragon ball universe are one now and is goku strong as when goku face piccolo in martial we tournament like most one piece people are lot more stronger than regular people in dragon ball universe.

No goku pair with chichi is fine but it’s your story on how you want to go for your direction but goku married to robin would be interesting and Sanji reaction to that would be hilarious.

I was wondering will he able to get others anime works in future because I think Jujutsu kaisen or HxH will be great choice

This is amazing story and writing is excellent and it’s blend so well with both one piece and dragon ball universe and I hope you can make more in the future because it’s have great potential.

I have a idea you can use in the future since he pick nagato powers since he can control dead bodies how about make them use the transformations jutsu and turn into anime characters appearance when he use different anime characters abilities so to surprise everybody wondering who they are and from where they come from is great idea. I like your story and good work