So far so good. I did notice some paragraph spacing issues, but I think that has more to do with the app than the writer. These apps can wreak havoc on formatting. The characters are likeable so far and the author does a good job of slowly feeding you info rather than info dumping. I'm liking the biblical undertones too. I'm not sure but I think this is turning into an angel falls for human type book. Pretty cool. I like it.

listen to her dude, i don't think mixing alien blood with human blood is smart

lol. i picture him being so irate right now lol

lol. I'd be worried about that ice cream too baby girl[img=recommend]