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nice chapter.
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for author, from the day I started I am continuously reading your story except one time where I took more than 4-5 days break. It was during meiko death scene🥲🥲 But again started because of Fujin and your writing.
Thanks for the chapter author. Finally caught up with latest chapter. Novel is going great. Please do continue and don't take breaks. I would suggest that seeing Fujin so strong now, instead of more powerups , he should focus on other topics, like life, medical , training children's ,etc with more interaction with Naruto, Sasuke and sakura. So that canon timeline still happens with some major changes. I would love to see Naruto Sasuke and sakura time in Shippuden with Fujin. Their emotional bonding and more. Though thanks for the story. Never believed a ninja story can be so good with training arcs.
nice
VERY VERY VERY VERY OPPPP chapter. Finally a change.
in the end even hiruzen dies when fuzin is so strong. Hates to see all character who are close to Fujin or considers to be dies and Fujin don't even feel anything for them . Though the novel is very much good, I guess this is its cons.
Why so less, will story end near them?
With just 14 chapters you can't expect me to give a good summary of pros and cons so early. Though I would say, it started great and I liked the MC's cheat power. I had read the author's other work, and I know if he is serious in continuing this book, it will be a great work. Though a little confused on how instead of skills ,etc, the first dragon has strength and weakness. Also please increase the chapter release count without reducing chapters length, as without a high release count, I have seen other great works to go down in ranking . Please don't drop the novel.