Daoist3sUIuc

I don't understand why you would write about this world, what will the traveler change there? I read the entire original novel, and the ending is quite good, everyone is alive and well, no one died, Sun Ji-woo saved the world and its inhabitants, and no one is suffering. There's simply nothing for the traveler to do there, no one to save, because Sun Ji-woo will save them, and so on. I just read this fanfiction and wondered why it was even necessary.

The fanfiction was very good, but the main character made a clone and sent it to another world, and that's how the fanfiction died for me. If you don't care about that, it's worth reading.

I didn't finish reading because it was painful to read about a 50-year-old who behaves so foolishly, who has lived almost a full life, but is unable to draw up a proper contract. However, the writing itself is beautiful, and it's rare to find such a beautiful text in a fanfiction. Good luck, author)

1. He has to fix or replace arcade equipment for life. 2. There was nothing about patents, or I didn't read that far. 3. He was friends with a yakuza princess who could order her subordinates to kill him if he refused her? 4. Since I didn't read about the patents, he gave his game consoles to the arcade owner, who could have made the same consoles as the protagonist, but since there was no patent, there was no lawsuit.

If you're looking for a smart business-minded protagonist, this isn't the story for you. This is the story of an idiot who signs slave contracts, doesn't make patents, teaches how to make consoles to the first person he meets, giving away all his inventions for free, and behaves, as I've already mentioned, like a complete idiot, even though he's 50 years old spiritually. It's very difficult to read. Every chapter highlights the protagonist's idiocy.

The synopsis is a complete lie, the main character fought a weak, aggressive version of Lexus on equal terms and was injured in the battle, and he is the strongest wizard in the guild, and everyone praises him, but he can't defeat Lexus without injury in less than a minute, fuh.

Thanks for the response, I hadn't looked at it from this perspective, and it's interesting, so we'll keep an eye on it. Keep up the good work, author.

Is the protagonist being humiliated in this story, or is it about something else?

There's too much sentimentality, the protagonist only knows Helen for 1-2 days, and he already loves her, tells her that he works for a super-secret agency, and so on. In a world where gods walk among us, where a single sneeze from a super-entity could destroy the world, he falls in love and enjoys himself instead of finding ways to become stronger. While I don't mind romance, it's too fast-paced and childish, like a ton of sugar being shoved down your throat when you're diabetic.

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