Peoniesanddaisies

Wait what??

So Charles is her husband? But she doesn’t like him anymore?

Such powerful scenes and use of words! I really like your writing. I don’t think there is a writer here that uses words like you do. One thing: I think others pointe this out already but the first chapter I was confused. I know you asked for more things that you wanted to work on but that’s the only thing I thought off Anyway I really love it !

This is getting good

Nicely written

This is so lovely

Hooooooo I honestly thought he was gonna get killed off

Lot of new names. I‘m not sure I get who’s who. But I like your writing style

Alright this guy s a bit of an assh*le but he’s funny

What a first chapter! I’m hooked