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VeraMera

VeraMera

Lv10

Trying to write again. Please leave a comment on my works so i can improve and make it better. Thank you!

2022-10-18 JoinedGlobal
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Commented
    Ch 18 The Rose and the Blood Thorn
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    Kingdom of Zo-An
    Fantasy · Dash_vin
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Replied to Aciee_GelaTin

    I really appreciate it, thank you! I'm happy you've loved it sofar. You're going to adore the upcoming chapters, I'm sure. Again, thank you! <3

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    The Celestial Empire
    Fantasy · VeraMera
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Replied to Pole_Star

    Thank you very much! I'm delighted you've enjoyed it so far! I hope you'll continue to support my novel <3

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    The Celestial Empire
    Fantasy · VeraMera
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Replied to leeroycgna

    Thank you for reading and finding my writing to date enjoyable! I'm constantly striving to improve so that you, the reader, have a wonderful reading experience with my novel. I'm hoping you will support it in the future! <3

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    The Celestial Empire
    Fantasy · VeraMera
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Replied to Tokio999

    I appreciate your time and interest in my novel so far. To give readers like you a fantastic reading experience when reading my book, I'm constantly working to improve. I hope you'll continue to support it! <3

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    The Celestial Empire
    Fantasy · VeraMera
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Replied to Moonwriting

    Thank you for reading and enjoying my work so far! I'm trying to be better to provide readers like you a great experience when reading my novel. I hope you continue to support it! <3

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    The Celestial Empire
    Fantasy · VeraMera
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Posted

    A great read! I would suggest writing a blurb or synopsis in the novel to attract more readers because this is a hidden gem! The plot flows nicely and the character engagement is superb. A wonderful read and I can't wait for more chapters!

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    The Vampire World
    Fantasy · Harley_pen
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Posted

    A fantastic read thus far! The plot is intriguing, and the flow of the story is simple to understand and follow. The reader's engagement in the world won't be affected by a few minor grammar mistakes. Did I also add how well the author created the world in this book? You could have been there because of the way they depicted the scene and the action. Good job and I'm adding this to my collection! Keep up the good work <3

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    Justice And Desire
    Urban · Jenival_Enyia
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Replied to Dash_vin
    Ch 10 A New World
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    The Celestial Empire
    Fantasy · VeraMera
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Posted

    The storyline so far is great. I like that you didn't sugarcoat any of the harshnesses of the mafia - it adds to the realness and reading experience. It's not all lovey-dovey romance, it's a real-life drama which I like and I don't see often here. The flow of the story is great and it leaves you wanting more. Keep up the good work!

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    Utilizing a mafia boss
    Realistic · Moonwriting
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Posted

    A great read all around. I kinda like that the chapters are long, it makes me feel like I'm reading a real paperback book, and it's easy to get lost in your world-building and storyline. The way you write the emotions that the characters are feeling is superb, you try to express it in words so that the readers can feel it too. Added to my collection! A great read indeed :)

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    Queen Of Slaves
    History · SoniiNaaz
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Posted

    A great read so far! A few grammatical errors here and there, but the plot makes you kinda forget it while reading since it flows so well. Keep up the good work! As a fix for your grammar, you can try having the chapter checked or run through a grammar checker first.

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    Reverie : The Reincarnated Warrior
    Fantasy · Tokio999
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Posted

    A very unique storyline. Can't wait for more! The pacing is great and I would like to see more of how their story develops. Keep up the good work!

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    Darling x Daddy
    Urban · Aciee_GelaTin
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Posted

    Great story so far! The plot is easy to follow and keeps you wanting to read it until there are no more chapters. What's cool about it is it's based loosely on Indian mythology, which is rare here in webnovel. I hope you will release more chapters, author since I'm dying to know what happens next! GREAT WORK! AUTHOR!

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    MALLIKARJUNA
    History · Pole_Star
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Posted

    A good read so far! The pacing is nice and easy flowing, and the way you kntroduce your character is great! I usually dont read this kind of novel due to my lack of knowledge of cultivation, but it's so interesting that I had to know what comes next! Definitely added to my collection

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    My Qi Keeps Resetting
    Fantasy · leeroycgna
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Posted

    Sun and Moon! The flow of the story is easy to follow and I really enjoyed how you made the ML and FL into very unique characters so far. I kept reading it until I finished all of the available chapters, and I want more :) Keep it up, you have a great novel in your hands :)

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    Full Moon of the Midnight Sun
    History · DollhousX
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Posted

    Great story flow and pacing! The characters are easy to imagine and root for. Keep up the good work! I enjoyed it so far and I'm looking forward to new chapters from you :)

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    Domineering Billionaire Husband and His Arrogant W (A passionate Love)
    Urban · Eva_Smith_0875
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Replied to ShinSungmi

    Thank you, thank you! I'm glad you liked it so far!

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    The Celestial Empire
    Fantasy · VeraMera
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Replied to Night_of_Dreams

    Thank you very much for your review! I hope you continue to support my novel, there will be many twists in the future :) Thank you again!

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    The Celestial Empire
    Fantasy · VeraMera
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  • VeraMera
    VeraMera1yr
    Replied to Little_North_Star

    Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so far. The general summary of my volume one is already complete, and I'm sure you're gonna love the next chapters to come. Thank you again!

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    The Celestial Empire
    Fantasy · VeraMera
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