Satans_Bastard

Yeah, I can't argue with that. Wizards in Harry Potter are eccentric.

What's with the monologues and why is she so wordy? It lowers the quality.

Are you provoking us on purpose? Evil.

Uh, don't mention Mito like that, I'm going to need another cold shower.

No, that would be stupid. Would it gain unnecessary hostility for what? A little satisfaction? While the sloth man cannot take direct action against the MC without revealing the fact that he has covered for him, he can increase scrutiny and don't forget who is practically his adoptive father, one word and the hyper intelligent mouse would be even more on his tail than he certainly will be. It's also worth stating that a legal system born under the legalization of vigilantism will likely have a very different view when it comes to police proactivity. It's just not worth it.

That's good, really good. The kind of "good" you get in SB and QQ. The kind of good that has quality and probably won't have immediately noticeable plot holes.

Eh, I really can't take this seriously with such artificial dialogues. ............. ............................................ .............................. ......................

I can't even accuse you of being cliché or bad quality, the social interactions in dxd are weird like that. It's funny to imagine, like anime only in your head, so I'm not complaining.

It started off well, but then it started to devolve into something generic and low-quality. ........ ................... .......................... ................ ................................

The quality dropped considerably after the revelation of who the MC was to the prostitute, but the main problem is that it turned into porn with a plot after the coronation.