This novel i read up to chapter 66 the author have to explain every nonsense things or say extra things it's annoying+ he is weak he knows he can levelup by killing monster but no he do nothing he just simply very vigilance and cautious he knows he is weak an know he the way he can be strong but aaaaa you will real a little an I'll understand everything i recommend people not wasting time on this i dont know how people have the patience to read all his inner monolog an author explain or saying every extra things the mc do an thinks how can you give 5* im very confus.....

Excuse me guys can any 1 tell me why ever/most Chinese novel start with junior High school, college examination etc even if the Mc have strong System he/she have to go to school or do High school examination. I mean he can be strong with out studing just relying on the system he can stand on top of the World but no have to go study an ways time it's the rules make by Chinese government? or something an in every Chinese novel the author have to prace Chinese country? I don't get it and 1 more thing I hav read many Chinese novel row or not in every novel people have to envy,hate, jealousy on the Mc or more rich handsome beautyful then them this show Chinese people mindset. I don't say all of them but i think 97% people have this mind set, for example ii have a friend in nort East India she say Chinese government is known as greedy trying to breech every nearby country for a peace of land an expend there country. Thi's means Chinese people are full of greed, envy etc.... i can say this with out blinking because evey novel ( i can be wrong but not all novel)show ther nature😋

Excuse me guys can any 1 tell me why ever/most Chinese novel start with junior High school, college examination etc even if the Mc have strong System he/she have to go to school or do High school examination. I mean he can be strong with out studing just relying on the system he can stand on top of the World but no have to go study an ways time it's the rules make by Chinese government? or something an in every Chinese novel the author have to prace Chinese country? I don't get it and 1 more thing I hav read many Chinese novel row or not in every novel people have to envy,hate, jealousy on the Mc or more rich handsome beautyful then them this show Chinese people mindset. I don't say all of them but i think 97% people have this mind set, for example ii have a friend in nort East India she say Chinese government is known as greedy trying to breech every nearby country for a peace of land an expend there country. Thi's means Chinese people are full of greed, envy etc.... i can say this with out blinking because evey novel ( i can be wrong but not all novel)show ther nature😋

Excuse me guys can any 1 tell me why ever/most Chinese novel start with junior High school, college examination etc even if the Mc have strong System he/she have to go to school or do High school examination. I mean he can be strong with out studing just relying on the system he can stand on top of the World but no have to go study an ways time it's the rules make by Chinese government? or something an in every Chinese novel the author have to prace Chinese country? I don't get it and 1 more thing I hav read many Chinese novel row or not in every novel people have to envy,hate, jealousy on the Mc or more rich handsome beautyful then them this show Chinese people mindset. I don't say all of them but i think 97% people have this mind set, for example ii have a friend in nort East India she say Chinese government is known as greedy trying to breech every nearby country for a peace of land an expend there country. Thi's means Chinese people are full of greed, envy etc.... i can say this with out blinking because evey novel ( i can be wrong but not all novel)show ther nature😋

This is the most confusing novel I'd ever read chap 60 under i can understand but above what a waste of tim suggestion do not read xciegehkwkwuwhwhhwhwjwjwwiiwowkwwjwhjwjwkwowowiwiwwiejejwjjejieiejeueuueueueeieieieieiieiee

All the wild Pokemon are vegetarian now? I mean he put his Pokemon in there boll an sleep in the middle of the forest 😂 O.M.G this FF is something i can not give 5* sorry author an the novel is soo push

Who says i don't want to read? I say if you want to attract more readers i suggest you don't add thos stuff

This novel writer i can not give him 5* his story is not good or something the problem is he never finished his work.Stop at the exiting part of the story an never continued writing agin

No offence. But if you just don't add romance/gay thing's an just let him explor an get new Pokemon the story will attract more people trust me you will get more reader no romance, if you want benifit from this novel, it's just suggestions you're novel will attract more people. An story is nice, grammar also not bed, overall the novel is great.

5* to this novel love it ther is no good FF on Pokemon but this is absolute tresure author keep it up please dont drop author ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Mc is a simp control by his Pokemon wimp especially the red gardiv its disappointment but the novel is not that trash except for the mc i think the writer already drop this ff but i post this for new reader the chapter is quite good an grammar also

Heatrun is not legendary

This story is soo push,i mean everything is soo push i don't know how to say just read an ill understand it's ......... I don't say don't read but for me its disappointment

This drop? Or not drop This drop? Or not drop This drop? Or not drop This drop? Or not drop This drop? Or not drop This drop? Or not drop This drop? Or not drop This drop? Or not drop This drop? Or not drop

Omg what's up with this novel, a 12 years old guy who is in Pokemon world an try to be a. Champion who don't even know gym bach an he start his Pokemon adventure Xd, an a girl who stole team rocket Pokemon which she doesn't even know the Pokemon name, but surprisingly knows the Pokemon moves Lol, an also she can directly command the Pokemon which not even belong to her. Author use your brain an write your novel

Omg what's up with this novel, a 12 years old guy who leave in Pokemon world who don't even know gym batch an start his Pokemon adventure, an a girl who stole other Pokemon which she doesn't even know the Pokemon name but miracle knows the Pokemon move Lol an also she can give a command the Pokemon which not even belong to her Author use your brain an write your novel

It's took 1 hole chapter to describe the city an the Black market

O.m.g the story development is sooo slow, an so many unnecessary words play, and the MC act as the world on him, very² careful in every thing an hiding every thing he thinks the world only revolve arround him trying to get him, i don't know how to describe others read an ill understand it's almost kinda annoying

The ooooooooooo thing is very annoying, some people use Google assistant to read the novel it's very² annoying please remove it if you remove oooooooooooooooo the novel will be better

Why is he sooo hellbent to share his secret???is he a girl?