See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Just needs the words to be polished but other than that it's a good novel

It need a lot of translation done to it because it gets confusing most of the time . But good story just that its very predictable ,the whole parent with researchers gone missing in an ancient civilization trope, sometimes it works & others it doesn't , so we will see were it goes.

Bruh!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

It feels familiar just can't put it together

I read this prolong somewhere but can't seem to remember

Great novel you have here ,I will be looking forward to more chapters so great work author.

Also more chapters will attract more readers so 20+ chapters will do for new readers to keep their interest and if they like it they will put it in their libraries and wait for more chapters like I did. So just have fun while doing it don't force yourself just do you while writing the novel Don't stress it. And I enjoyed all the chapters that are out so just continue, you just might be surprised by it.

Thanks looking forward to it

Author are u dead or somethin, because u can't leave us hanging like this man. I want more chapters plz because I was enjoying this. Anyways update soon

Author is you dead or something

I'm seriously tired of this type of copy & paste novels are in the hundreds and the is know uniqueness to them. It's always the journey to know the about the universe and shit , that is why I hate the mistery tag with burning passion. Almighty this almighty that it's so annoying and the kneel before me type of shit and there unadulterated arrogance is just not fun, and I nearly forgot about the npcs of this world's are always on glazing mode because of this the world's are never truly alive. Damn I wrote a whole ass essay for this shit, anyways def not recommend 0/5 stars for me. 😒

Okay I will stay tuned

Does the MC just follows along with everything the other characters do, because if so that's just plain boring. It's very one dimensional of the Mc, he needs variety of action not just saying okay to everything. Anyway it's your novel what am I to complain. Best of luck with the novel ✌️

Great novel but the chapters are just too short but great read I must say and I like the Alucard reference there so farm so good so keep it up , just make the a little long and that's it 👍