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Rapidmoviment

Rapidmoviment

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I like fantasy stories and realistic stories.

2022-10-07 JoinedGlobal
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1mth
    Posted

    PilgrimJagger never disappoints. I can see this as a huge success! I love psycho villains and the world building seems promising. For those who haven't read yet, this is a revenge story.

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    FORGED BY FLAMES: REBIRTH OF THE PYROMANCER.
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment2mth
    Commented

    Good

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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment2mth
    Posted

    I came here from the Biological Supercomputer System. The book is starting well. Hope the author keeps up with the pace.

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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment8mth
    Posted

    Ok. First of all, I don't want to offend the author with this review. Secondly, I'm going to review the first 20 chapters. With that said I'm implying that the book will surely improve in future chapters, as the author gets experience but judging by the first 20 Ch I have to say I didn't like this. First, the fact that the MC wants at all costs become a pro player is stupid, at least in my opinion. I don't think some people would really want to try a path with no certainties in a situation where he has no money and doesn't know how to survive. Aside from that, the story itself is nothing new. Aside from the fact that the MC chose a difficult race, there is nothing innovative here. The world-building seems pretty standard, again nothing new. The fact that the MC meets the weapon trainer and the mage "trainer" at the beginning already points to where the author wants to go, but it is another clichè, even the I Got the Masters is a whole clichè. As for the plot itself, where does it lead? What is it that makes it different from other books? Then, the writing quality. Ok, there are not many grammatical errors, yet the MC talks in a weird way with the NPCs, in a totally different way from real life and different compared to how he talks IRL. Then, the fights: essentially Here is the enemy, here is the enemy status, here is a couple of skills, enemy felled. It is rather simple. Notice: This is just my personal opinion. I'm by no means trying to offend or saying my words are absolute. This is an opinion. Feel free to disagree and to read.

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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1yr
    Commented

    thank you!

    Ch 24 Starting the extraction
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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1yr
    Commented

    intresting chapter!

    Ch 18 What did you just say?
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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1yr
    Commented

    epic chapter!

    Ch 17 Attack to the barrier (3)
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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1yr
    Commented

    I like this military organization

    Ch 15 Attack to the barrier (1)
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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1yr
    Commented

    This is the best chapter for now. Beatifoul descriptions of the city!

    Ch 11 Benjamin Kaminski (2)
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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1yr
    Commented

    I'm so curious! What will the Sergent be like?

    Ch 10 Benjamin Kaminski (1)
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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1yr
    Commented

    Good descriptions, like chapter 7 :)

    Ch 8 First training
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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1yr
    Commented

    I like the development of the story.

    Ch 6 That Explains a lot
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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1yr
    Posted

    This novel is so original! The book is the most fascinating I've ever read on Webnovel. The quality is really higt, the characters are shady and intresting, the language is rich and the plot is engaging! Thank you writer !

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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
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  • Rapidmoviment
    Rapidmoviment1yr
    Posted

    Beautiful version of an apocalypse. Beautiful description of the cataclism, a little bit gory near the end. Good work. When can I read more?

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