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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    Neat!

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    Monster Girl Quest: Eeveelution
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
    Commented

    Lovely chapter

    Ch 43 Magical Girl Sylveon is BACK!
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    You said to correct grammer so don't get mad but you wrote hair when you almost certainly meant air

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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    Lovely chapter as always. Nice to see what the end of Kevin's rope looks like.

    Ch 40 Kevin Needs a Break
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    Yay! New Chapter! I quite liked the moves Kevin used especially the last one. I also like how we got narrative pay off for the bag of holding having an ocean in it.

    Ch 39 Destroying the Pyramid
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    You accidentally said Team B instead of Team C. I know this is a mistake because you actually use Team C for who they fight

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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    You spelled her name wrong here

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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    While it is true that they aren't as powerful in the "real" world I still think they would have beaten Bakugo (if they were not holding back specifically to avoid that. Where they specifically doing that?)

    Rank 2: Ren Tanaka - 76 points.
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    Nice chapter overall! It was good to get some action and I am looking forward to seeing Dante's pov during the exam proper.

    Ch 18 U.A. Entrance Exam! Part 2.
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    See having just the one onemonopeia here stops it from looking weird. so this is a nice change from the early chapters

    BOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    I presume you meant One For All here?

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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    If so then by having abilities rely on stanima and having unlimited stanima, he then has unlimited abilities for cheaper amounts of dream energy

    "I advise you guys to think carefully. If that can help you, know that I chose to prioritize my stamina. My future fighting style will rely heavily on my multiple abilities, so I will need a big stamina pool, plus, it's not like I will lack raw power with our bodies that will automatically get stronger, so I rather boost my stamina, that will allow me to dominate any enemy I will fight."
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    Can he gather dream energy to give himself increasingly large amounts of stamina until he can eventually give himself infinite stanima?

    "I advise you guys to think carefully. If that can help you, know that I chose to prioritize my stamina. My future fighting style will rely heavily on my multiple abilities, so I will need a big stamina pool, plus, it's not like I will lack raw power with our bodies that will automatically get stronger, so I rather boost my stamina, that will allow me to dominate any enemy I will fight."
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    Nice quirk name!

    "You are right... Then I shall call my quirk Dusk, the end of the day, a name fitting for a quirk that shall bring forth the end of the light hehehe..."
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    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    exept where there is light as darkness is merely the absence of light

    All the abilities I chose can be put under the banner of darkness manipulation... that is the path I chose. I chose this as my quirk because I think darkness is something extremely versatile, it has no predetermined form, and it can become anything. The last reason that pushed me towards that path is simple... Darkness is everywhere."
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    week not weak (used the word for lacking strength instead of the unit of time you meant to use

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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    Was he chugging orange juice for 2 hours straight or just enjoying a glass or 2 slowly over the course of 2 hours?

    Just like that, Dante spent the next two hours drinking orange juice (he was still five years old after all) and thinking of how he would use the abilities he would give himself. It was only after two hours that Dante was finally joined by one of his three friends.
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    My review of the chapter is that it is a good one. Ren got lightning powers because he liked the idea of them and Hyato also had a narratively satisfying way of picking what he wanted.

    Ch 14 Shock and Awe! Simple is The Best!
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    You never specifically state what Hyato's choice was only that he made it. Is that due to building suspense or did I just misread?

    Ch 14 Shock and Awe! Simple is The Best!
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  • Chaos_Dracoslayer
    Chaos_Dracoslayer1yr
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    Early on in the chapter when Ren is regretting where he went for power ideas you call him Dante on accident. Also you misspelled Dream World as Drea World at the very beginning.

    Ch 14 Shock and Awe! Simple is The Best!
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