ILoveIU3000

After reading this novel my only problem is that it lacks enough quality in writing. I like how the story is being told and the development so far, it's just that I am not satisfy with how the author construct his sentence and paragraphs. There's always something lacking when I read it. Though, overall, I don't have any problem with them. This just my own opinion, so please don't take any offense Author. I like your work, just please improve your writing