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A good story and please be mindful of the gaps between conversation as it it confusing who's talking .
Have you noticed anything fun in this chapter as i left some stupid answers for it ?
A five star review for a fine story and don't stop writing this book cause I want to completely read this book and don't drop this book in middle.
This book contains several inconsistencies and noticeable gaps in explanation. For example, it’s never clearly explained how people from the Doupo world are able to identify that certain individuals are from another world. There are multiple issues like this throughout the story where important details are either missing or poorly justified. One of the most significant problems, however, is the power scaling. The comparison between worlds feels inconsistent,
Thanks man !!
say that again