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DEvz291mthCommentedCh 4 Anniversary Tourney II- DEvz291mthCommented
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2) Having the mc become one of the students during the era of the founders... - DEvz293mthCommented
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Not possible it would break competition laws. You can't own 2 franchises even if its indirect.
As many of you already know, one major project we will invest in is the acquisition of the Chicago Bulls NBA basketball team. Not only does the image and brand of this team perfectly fit with our company, but it will also mark the start of a long-term strategy to invest in the sports entertainment market. The overall investment will probably be around 30-40 million $, as we not only need to acquire the team, but also keep enough liquidity to renovate and upgrade the arena and the team. - DEvz293mthCommented
I believe u meant patrons, fidelius is for the house thing with the secret keeper
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no bro it wouldn't be 2 chapters compressed into one. It would actually be a normal sized chapter. These are way to short
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Luke
After we were done eating me, Haley, Alex, and luck got in Clara's car she dropped of luck first then Alex then us - DEvz293mthCommented
The greatest*
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It is unique and the Viserys one is such a common trope ive seen 3 just on here, this seems fresh and will show relationships with some of the much older characters giving a fresh perspective.
A younger son of Jaehaerys I who is plotting to be the power behind the throne. - DEvz294mthCommented
defo this one
A younger son of Jaehaerys I who is plotting to be the power behind the throne. - DEvz294mthReplied to Dao_Of_Shamelessnz
the image sucks she looks like she stuck a goth stuck a fork in the electric socket.
Thalia: - DEvz294mthCommented
I actually really respect that you can always come back to the One piece universe later when the story develops. Also maybe he could save some key people or make their life better. Robin, Rouge, baby 5. It would also be nice to see his relationship with Garp
For everyone screaming because I didn't come up with something, well what did you expect? This is a fanfiction, not a bestselling novel. I am not a professional. No matter what I would write, it wouldn't do One Piece justice. - DEvz295mthCommented
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1. Galactic Systems Alliance - DEvz296mthCommentedCh 35 *Not a chapter* Leave your questions
- DEvz296mthCommentedCh 14 Ideas?(Not A Chapter)
- DEvz296mthCommentedCh 14 Ideas?(Not A Chapter)