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Cylon_41yrReplied to Gabichu_YeahNot a waste of development, you have to remember that he has little to no reason to have the Kryptonians brought back. Kor-El/Corey Graves needs reasons to do something. He plans accordingly because he isn't as comic savvy as we are. He will not make bigger plans for his own race until he has a reason to. This is both from his experience on Krypton as well as what he knows. Ie, Zod and Kryptonians trying to wipe out the human race. That gives room for character development to move past his distrust and more. That should have been obvious, but if it wasn't then maybe wait before acting like this was a typical reincarnation fanfic story.
Ch 1 Chapter 1- Cylon_41yrCommentedKor opened his eyes after hearing the Kryptonian come to a stop near him. When he did, his eyes gazed upwards to find a white Caucasian skinned woman floating above him. The woman had black hair like Kor, wore a more exposed Kryptonian attire. It was dark gray with a cape of the same color, as well as black spandex like leggings, and even had House Zod's sigil upon her chest. Kor frowned not entirely sure who this was, nor why they had Zod's House sigil. That said he knew a warrior when he saw one, and this one was most certainly a warrior.
- Cylon_41yrCommentedMoments after entering the lobby, Marcus was approached by his secretary and aide. It was a Russian looking woman with long and well taken cared of midnight black hair. She wore a she had pink white skin, velvet red lips, and mesmerizing dark gray eyes. She was adorned with a long sleeved white shirt that showed some of her well developed breasts. Below that was a belt that held her black trousers above her waist. And below that, were black heels that she had no trouble walking in. There was also a pair of black leather gloves on her hands as well as she held a touchscreen tablet in one hand. Marcus' secretary stood at 6"1, being taller than the average woman.
- Cylon_41yrCommentedXendor stepped inside slowly, and began walking about, looking at different items inside. Eventually he came to a halt when he saw a lean builded man tinkering with something. He wore a deep sea blue uniform, had a trimmed beard midnight black hair, and silver gray eyes. He turned and saw Xendor standing there and simply gave him a nod. "Xendor, I was expecting you." The Kanoan male greeted dryly.
- Cylon_41yrCommentedXendor was inside of an elevator that continued to go down. There were roughly 300 levels that the elevator could go to. He was going to the lowest level to meet Kanoa's most intelligent individual. In a few moments, the elevator opened to reveal a dark sleekly designed hallway with dim lights above. Xendor stepped out of the elevator and marched down the hallway with a serious expression. Within the hallway were armored Kanoans wearing bulky armor, but seemingly boasting no weapons. They stood a good 6"1 in height and seemed to be guarding the door at the end of the hallway. As Xendor reached said door, he watched it slide open to reveal a gym sized laboratory.
- Cylon_41yrCommentedKara stared wide eyed at the many Kanoans walking about, doing their duties, or training with different weapons being from spears, swords, or projectile weaponry. Xendor would come to a stop as they reached a large white spacious room. It was an opened doorway, showing more than a hundred men and women laid out in white skin tight spandex like bodysuits. Each were bruised up, out cold, or groaning from pain. At the center of the room was a tall dark skinned woman, she had a physique befitting an Amazon. Actually compared to normal Amazons, she looked stronger. She was adorned with white chrome like armor as well as a red cape hanging from her back. A shield of the same material was in her hand, as well as a gleaming bronze like sword. Kara gazed at her with wonder, and couldn't help but admire her. The woman turned to show her facial features, locking eyes directly with Xendor. She had piercing blue eyes that looked as if they were that of lightning. Long dark brown hair that reached past her shoulders and had elements of orange at the strand tips. As well as a stoic like expression that slowly turned into one of fondness upon seeing Xendor.
- Cylon_41yrReplied to Mytici
You won't find it on Pintrest, I found it on Twitter. I can't remember the artist's name there but that is where I found it.
(This is more of a guilty pleasure than anything. Kanoa is an OC city of Metahumans like Krakoa is in Marvel. The only difference being that Kanoans have been around for over a thousand years. Xendor is also an OC character and there will be plenty of OC characters to fill in the Kanoan's ranks. The MC is like a mixture of Batman and Black Panther put together. So in other words, he makes contingency plans for contingency plans. As well as being on the level of an "Omega Level Mutant", though I won't tell you what his powers are. You'll have to figure it out later into the story. Lastly, he wears more than one suit for different occasions, the one that he used in this chapter was his stealth suit to which he called the Knightmare armor.) - Cylon_41yrReplied to Mysterious_Lord
Xendor is strong just not to the point that he's OP. So basically he is not as strong as Superman, though he is capable of making him feel pain. In other words if Wonder Woman chose to fight him then it would be an even fight. As far as if he will get stronger, yes he will. What he needs is something to push him over his limit.
(This is more of a guilty pleasure than anything. Kanoa is an OC city of Metahumans like Krakoa is in Marvel. The only difference being that Kanoans have been around for over a thousand years. Xendor is also an OC character and there will be plenty of OC characters to fill in the Kanoan's ranks. The MC is like a mixture of Batman and Black Panther put together. So in other words, he makes contingency plans for contingency plans. As well as being on the level of an "Omega Level Mutant", though I won't tell you what his powers are. You'll have to figure it out later into the story. Lastly, he wears more than one suit for different occasions, the one that he used in this chapter was his stealth suit to which he called the Knightmare armor.) - Cylon_41yrCommentedAs Kara moved herself to where she could get out of bed, she felt sunlight come down onto her. Her sky blue eyes turned to the source of the sun and stared wide eyed at it. She stood on her feet and began walking slowly towards a balcony. As she reached the doorway of the balcony she felt the sun's light hit her skin like a warm embrace. Her power was already becoming rejuvenated, almost being back to full power. Kara's eyes then landed on a small city that looked like one like Kandor. Her eyes widened with wonder as she gazed out over the skyscrapers.
- Cylon_41yrCommentedOnce Kara and her rescuer were inside of the plane, the man set her down and watched as the hatch that they entered through close. Kara felt her heart thumping through her chest, she had escaped, she was out of Stryker's Island. For a whole week she assumed that she would never escape, but here she was well away from her captors. She stared at her rescuer as he walked towards the cockpit of the ship. The plane resembled that of an old Cold War Blackbird, though it was much larger and boasted more room inside. At the front of the plane was no one, the plane was on autopilot.
- Cylon_41yrCommented"I disagree.." A deep baritone and distorted voice argued, causing Adam and Damian to become vigilant. Unfortunately neither one of them were prepared for who had said that. No sooner than those words had been said, a device came zooming in from the ceiling of the chamber and planted itself on Adam's chest. A single beep was heard before Adam was sent flying backwards from a powerful explosion. The shockwave sent Damian away from Adam, causing him to hit the nearby railings. The young adult shook his head, then turned to find a man cloaked in dark armor whose helmet had hueing red visors staring back at him from 6 feet away from him. The man stood a good 6"6, he had a black cape that hid his muscles but Damian could tell that the man must have been well built in some regard. Despite the situation he remained calm and let an overconfident smirk come onto his face.
- Cylon_41yrReplied to ErozothDraeorCh 1 Chapter 1
- Cylon_41yrCommentedHe put on a pair of lean black silk like khakis, a dark gray two button shirt, black dress shoes, and even grabbed a pair of bifocals. Kor turned to look at himself in a self made mirror. He straightened his clothes before seeing the image of Jor-El's face appear beside his in the mirror. The look on Jor-El's face appeared to be a rather troubled one. Kor knew why his father was making that face, the construct of his father's consciousness was worried about him. Especially after knowing that Kal-El was not with him.
- Cylon_41yrReplied to ShadowMonarch21
DCAU version actually, so the Codex does not exist here
"Be safe son, and be sure to look out for Kara. She will not he far behind you two, take care of them...no matter what happens." Lara said, though near the end of her sentence her voice trembled as she embraced Kor once more. Her grip on him being a little tighter than before. Before long she released him, and watched as Kor slowly but surely got into the pod's seat. He felt the seat move and get situated as Kal-El's bed began to move as well. The bed was moved to where Kal-El would be looking at him. Kor stared at his brother for a moment in silence, then sent one last look at his parents as the capsule for the pod began to close shut. Jor and Lara stared at him whe holding each other in a tight embrace. Not long after, he felt the pod being moved upwards, then felt it be propelled up and out of the hanger.