PyrrhicWriter

to offset the dickriders or illiterates who give 5 stars for no reason

2nd review cuz what is this. this author has some cringe vendetta against men lol, the most recent one was "4 ways asshole men should suffer" and shit like that literally every 2 chapters is so cringe, idk why every web novel author has some secret fantasy about being the only good man in the universe and everybody else getting tortured for being rapists, or just being rude but this is some incel writing, wish I could give less stars

Why is there a rapist male or just rude guy every 2 chapters who gets his balls busted every 2 chapters bro, stop writing like an incel it's so cringe.

A FULL OVERVIEW (up to chapter 500)It was good at first and is good at times but holy sh*t is it SO annoying to read. For some reason every man in the novel is either a criminal inc*stuous r*pist to have his c*ck ripped off by a girl to make her look strong and ruthless (overused as is), Or some manly competitor for the MC to beat look good with, (with outliers like his masters) Now with this you'd assume it's the run of the mill s*xist author who overuses r*pe tropes cuz he doesn't know any other way to empower women in his novel, and you'd be half right, cuz for some reason EVERY woman in the story is getting flirted with, objectified, seduced, and fucked by the mc with ease and with almost no development leading to that? like "oh this relationships kinda ass" *insert unnecessary and out of nowhere s*x scene with emotional points so the mc doesn't look like an inconsiderate perv* all of which is ignored a few chapters later because it wasnt real and it was just a firced sex scene, and the author needs to wallow in his characters self pity some more. like, literal demigods that could look at him to death are getting seduced and getting all h*rny for him in 2 seconds for no reason at all, no development, no character building, he just confidently talks down to them and they fall for him for some reason?all this while the MC wails about how hard his relationships are, and his literal hoes always pin the blame on him and he somehow sides with them every time?? like it's both their fault why is it EXCLUSIVELY being pinned on him throughout the whole story?? not to mention the overbearing amount that extraneous shit is done, it'll be MAYBE 1-2 chapters of training/combat and another 4 for each of his girlfriends, 4 for his mom, 4 for some random weak planet or 2 each, it's so slow and exhausting with quick power jumps over 1-2 chapters followed by pointless time wasting not only in writing but for the mc, who's for some reason the most clever and witty person in arguments with people 1000x stronger and older than him, but a f*cking idiot when it comes to powering up and relationships.overall it looks like the author has some oddball savior and "super cool masculine seducer" fetish along with insane amounts of attention seeking self pity he can't help but put in his writing, its like all the blame HAS to be assigned to this MC of his so his persona can get attention and pity from everybody and he can j*rk off in a dark room to the characters he seduces, insane amounts of potential and has pretty good writing but by far one of the most excruciating, cringe, unnecessarily wasteful and ruined novels I've read. so horrible

The author forcing himself to write this down so some teenagers will get weird fantasies and keep reading

I love the silly old mentor trope 💀

transformation is at stage 4 lol