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I like the concept I'd say add a picture to your book that will attract more readers a blank one doesn't, like i read 3 fanfics before i got to yours, and I only read yours because i was trying to get a feel of Shadow Slave fanfics, though to my suprise yours had way more than most do, and everything your doing seems solid while minus the 2 Divine Aspects but since the story is yours it's ok.
Reminds me of...the spiderman meme
The novel is one of the best I've read, a great and rare power system which is a breath of fresh air, actually good female characters which is hard to find, cool character designs and a rare world background.
NoDormantAwakenedAscendedTranscendedSupremeSacred/SagradoDivine/Divino
Which is why Im gonna restart
Well I do see that it's late but just wanted to restart everything
So this is where it started
Let's go Sunny finna be swimming with the fishes.
I can't really complain though If there's one thing I love more than anything else is a good power system and yours is great. I also love how Sunny's character changed through volume 3 and 4.
can't really complain since it's still new