Laura_4606

It was entertaining, although I felt that we didn‘t need as many POVs. There are some grammar and spelling issues, but it still was mostly easy to read. Love scenes feel a bit unimaginative. What really made me give it a lower rating is that even after 135 long chapters the end seems abrupt and very unfulfilling. There is no actual Happy End, just a lot of hurt feelings and promises. I’m guessing there will be a part two based on how it ended, but I wouldn’t spend money on this again.