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BoredMansDream11mthReplied to Ouroboros_OutingsThere isn’t an leaderboard for comments, there is for collections, powerstones, and popularity, though
thank yall a lot, cause yall know how much I love comments.- BoredMansDream11mthReplied to Ouroboros_OutingsCh 14 Ch 11: I am a Maraca
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They give me ideas for the future, which can help the books progression. They give me energy to write more chapters, and they give me the knowledge that all of you enjoy the story
thank yall a lot, cause yall know how much I love comments. - BoredMansDream11mthReplied to InsertaGoodName
Yeah, but MC doesn’t know that, does he?
10's of people stood outside, waiting for us. An impressive amount, considering that I hadn't seen a single farm or anything being sold yet, although that's likely because I've been focused on getting here in the first place. A large box stood right in front of all the people, were Maz set me. - BoredMansDream11mthReplied to InsertaGoodName
Oh, i wrote the wrong word, sorry, it was an obsidian knife
This paragraph has been deleted. - BoredMansDream11mthReplied to Captain_ChaseCh 22 Ch 18: Making Plans
- BoredMansDream11mthReplied to InsertaGoodName
Nah, the wiki itself says they are fine
I sneeze as a golden petal floats onto my nose. - BoredMansDream11mthReplied to Captain_ChaseCh 22 Ch 18: Making Plans
- BoredMansDream11mthReplied to AnotherAtlas
I normally really appreciate reviews likw this as they give me knowledge to improve, but there are a few problems. 1, you complain about the MC swearing too much, even though he swears a normal amount except for the very beginning, where he is literally in a car crash. You panic. That is normal. This piece of criticism is useless, especially as it relates to your own personal opinion. 2, ‘Slice of Life is synonomous with boring.’ My guy, it has the slice of life tag and YOU chose to click on it. How is that my problem? Useless advice. 3, ‘fourth wall breaking isn’t funny and breaks immersion’. My MC has broken the fourth wall a total of three times at most and none of them have ever been complained about breaking immersion. You are the only person to complain about it and considering the previous advice, it is likely useless as well and you are likely the only person who finds the fourth wall breaking a problem. 4, you say that I fail to introduce how the economy and the world works while the MC is trying to get his life together. Tell me, is your first priority when you moved out of your parents basement to look at what computer stores are in the area or was your first focus to get a house and a job? The world has barely been introduced, yes, but it is a slice of life and there is plenty of time to introduce what is necessary. As such, this piece of advice is useless I think that the reader fails to maintain a reasonable review, as I have proven his every complaint irrelevant. Thank you. Have a good day
- BoredMansDream11mthReplied to Ouroboros_OutingsCh 11 Ch 8: I am a Town Part 3
- BoredMansDream11mthReplied to AnotherAtlas
Bro really said he wouldn’t panic and curse when getting into a car crash💀
"FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK! OH GOD FUCK!" I couldn't help but panic as I stumbled out of my now smoking truck and to the other persons wrecked car. The truck was made In the 90s and built like a tank, so my hopes weren't high... - BoredMansDream11mthReplied to MrIIIo
What is the difference between being blessed by a priest and being blessed by a god? Thats why the strength is registered as ‘lesser blessing’ and ‘greater blessing’. Neither say exactly how much stronger, because that is a plot point later.
Be stronger than the average human (Greater blessing) - BoredMansDream11mthReplied to GaZe_ZeroCh 20 Announcement
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It will still be updated
As I am sure you all know, all good things must come to an end. That is no exception even to this novel. However, when good things end, other good things replace it. - BoredMansDream11mthReplied to GeeGeeTeeWuu
I appreciate your honesty, but i can promise yall will like it, this is my masterpiece that I am working on right now. I even plan on submitting it for this years webnovel spiritzy for unique systems
Authors note: I looked at what yall said you would do if I wrote a novel, and now I got some tags for the novel. I am not gonna tell you the story though, cause its unique enough that I don't want the story stolen. Tell me if ya would read that - BoredMansDream11mthReplied to Mr_JakCh 19 Ch 16: These Newfangled Machines Got me all Confounded!
- BoredMansDream11mthReplied to Ouroboros_Outings
Technically, i am not number one yet. I will beat Strength of Will
"Waiting to become the number one Undertale Fan Fic fills you with Patience." - BoredMansDream11mthReplied to Ouroboros_OutingsCh 19 Ch 16: These Newfangled Machines Got me all Confounded!
- BoredMansDream11mthReplied to Jester_Advocate
Well, either way im sure you know my intentions to not have a harem cause i put in the no harem tag
Authors note: I looked at what yall said you would do if I wrote a novel, and now I got some tags for the novel. I am not gonna tell you the story though, cause its unique enough that I don't want the story stolen. Tell me if ya would read that