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    Perdues13 days ago
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    We went from killing all the bad guys to suddenly choosing non-lethal when the two leaders of the enemy show up. Makes literally zero sense.

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    Perduesa month ago
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    Concept seems promising, but the characters, plotline and setting have been butchered beyond all belief. Writer starts us in Braavos then describes all the events as though it's Pentos, then Pentos is used as the next setting when it would've been super easy just to use the cities around the other way for a coherent plot. MC decision making is also so moronic that it's genuinely painful to read - has two people who are entirely incompatible with his plans at futuristic laser gunpoint and doesn't shoot them for...reasons? Then chooses to summon knights over modern soldiers? Lack of logic is problematic to say the least. I wouldn't normally go to the extent of leaving a review, but the way this story was sitting over a score of 4 was too bewildering to ignore.

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    Perduesa month ago
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    Classic example of an author that can't control their powercreep urges. MC starts with a gamer system which has features added to the point where he is summoning characters strong enough to match an avatar, on top of his own growth. Unfortunately, the author doesn't write a real impactful scenario where the MC is actually able to use that power, so the world just seems stupid and unbalanced. MC is incredibly unintelligent from a planning perspective which adds to the flaws. Main feedback point is - if you're going to give your MC massive power and then have them never use it to create a positive change during important moments (e.g. village attack), it's deeply unsatisfying.