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Fixed, Thx
no AI was used, I previously attempted to use AI which resulted in many changes such as the removal of Sato's unique Sharingan and its abilities since it isn't canon. I manually add/replace/remove words to help readers understand oddly worded sentences and try to make it less Chinese-like.
sasuke currently is too weak for Orochimaru, so if he does take it rn, he'll get 1 shotted.
To start the process the person needs to be under his control, for example the reanimated and the ones under his genjutsu. However it could happen as I don’t know what happens in the future due to the fact I’m translating and reading it at the same time.
I don’t think he’s powerful enough to devour her, genjutsu is useless against her and there just isn’t an effective to control her.
This arc sees Orochimaru's attempt to destroy Konohagakure, leading to the 3rd hokage’s death
Sry about that, I thought I fixed it.
how would you translate this to something more readable and less confusing? Its name is...Huangquanjin Huangquanjin is one of the aliases and titles of the goddess Eva Ran in an island mythology in Liu Sheng's previous life, also known as Huangquanjin god-tier. The name Eva Ran may be unfamiliar to everyone, but she has several other names, one of which is Izanami! Yes, Chuang Si Jin and Iran Mei are the same goddess. However, in the world of Hokage, Huang Quanjin is just the name of a kind of pupil technique, and has nothing to do with Izanami. So, what ability does Huang Quanjin's pupil technique have? In the myth of an island country in the previous life, there are several versions of the underworld, among which there is the Huangquan Kingdom ruled by the "Huangquanjin god-tier".
fixed
cant do much about it, just translating, sry