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I don't share your way to perceive our current world is in decay and our morals are decaying too. We are currently in the most prosperous period of all our history! Before, nobody cared if a nation indiscriminately bombed certain countries to open trade routes, women rights were a mess, men rights were also a mess, workers rights and before people died for so-called glory but that was also a lie. I appreciate your writing of alternative history or fan-fiction, I really like it so I can even ignore a lot of your ideals if you wrote this based on your ideals. I'm conservative man but I know very well how lucky I'm to be born in this time period and not before.
hello author, it wouldn't hurt if you add more paragraphs describing mc going from one point to another, not just chatty and info dumps.Why not add a narrator pov? Then swift to mc pov from time to time, you read first and second chapter but that was the impression the novel gave me.
Yeah! I found it out too while reading about ships... Our Mc isn't perfect all knowingly, I added a few bad decisions before too! They will haunt him in the future
It's hard... And counterproductive since a country needs innovation and competitiveness, a single person owning the whole country's business it's a bad example for the future development of the kingdom.
Hello, my friend, thanks for your support! I really appreciate corrections like this... I found this info from Wikipedia, and a Turkish wiki if I recall correctly, remember that info is the Ottoman direct control territories, just like the British Empire, not colonies or principalities.Ottoman was a decadent empire, I recall they improved their economy after German investments... I might be wrong but I remember reading a book before that the German Kaiser began influencing on Ottoman Empire after 1897
Thanks! I'm better now
nope, Ethiopia was colonized after WWI... Romania might become their "commercial partner", I always though that colonizing and creating resentment of native people is not worthy no matter how many benefits you can get. Instead, partnering and maybe influencing their politics while taking care of the people's opinions it's way better.
I'm reading the book "the fox at the front", perhaps the fanfic is from that book?
he's helping him correcting his mistakes!
Thanks for correcting it!