yeah I thought you abandoned this fanfic anyway love ❤️ the fanfic and please🙏🙏 more chapters tomorrow 🥺

I'm not going to lie I read this fanfiction for 30 chapters but I cannot anymore writing style is so annoying to read please dialogue is so dramatic I mean I'm not saying I hate the story but is the writing style is definitely hard to ignore I'm sorry but I have to go to off my chest anyway I still enjoy your story but if you can try another style of writing like trying not to make everything happening story overly dramatic anyway that's all and still thanks for the chapter

I want more chapters give me more

More chapters please 🙏🙏🙏🙏😭😭😭

please give us more I wanted I'm already addicted

why the hell is the sword a short sword wasn't it going to be like a great sword or a long sword it looks like a short sword maybe you didn't find a great picture but still it doesn't look like a great sword or a long sword or a bastard sword 🤔🤔

is she dumb does she want a dance of the Dragons before it even begin she's crazy this will be a great mix of Blackfyre Rebellion and the dance of the dragons with her help the realm going to burn faster 🔥🔥🔥💀💀💀👍👍👌🤣🤣🤣🤣

I still have a question why is he acting like he's still 6 year old like he's acting like a child like nearly everything about him is childish the weird that attachment to the queen and generally it'll be everything about him is childlike it's kind of weird isn't he a grown man mentally I mean the only memories he lost is you know the DC Universe information didn't you say that yourself so why is he acting like a normal child anyway I have to say it because it was eating me up like I was confused

the f*** is wrong with him he fall in love with a girl that he doesn't know her name of that's just crazy and if he's going to continue this he's going to have like 100 women or something as his wives I want to know though is he going to collect a woman like Pokemon because it seems like that just because of the way he fell in love with her I want their relationship to fail so bad because it doesn't make sense I think he's just in love with her beauty and he doesn't give a f*** about her character or who she really is I mean even Daenerys is questionable but he know her character somewhat from the books and TV show but this girl he doesn't know her name I will say it again he doesn't know even her name that's just crazy at this right he's going to have some prostitute woman as his wife too if all it takes is just sleeping with him the f*** anyway I'm sorry for the yapping but I have to get this off my chest and one important thing I nearly forgot is this thing he's planning like marry her and making her his wife it is going to be highly politically challenging you know succession and all that is she going to be his man wife is she going to grow to resent him and Daenerys and their line and try to eliminate Daenerys and his line to make sure her children will be the inheritors of his wealth and all things he possess he doesn't even think about all this he's so stupid I want to punch him to death

what I want to say is that I am mad he chose two glorified daggers then a fencing sword if he's worried about the weight and balance I'm historically speaking Pirates and Navy officers use them all the time so why didn't he use the fencing sword I'm sorry I don't know the Pacific name of the sword type forgive me for that anyway that's what I'm mad about and destroying the sword to create two daggers

yeah I'm not going to consider that thing as a sword it is a slightly longer dagger nothing more nothing less

I tried but I cannot shut my mouth I mean the guy just traded a a perfect weapon to 2 glorified daggers is he going to be a faceless man or a Lord that going to fight in the Frontline of the battlefield that really irritated me and she cannot even complain that's the weapon we're slowing down because of the weight because of his superhuman strength and speed leaving the store should be like wielding a feather oh I hope he actually remake it it's former form

Bruuuuuu!!!!!!!!!💀💀💀💀

I mean not actually when you compare to Gandhi who slept next to little girls to test his patience and self-control that's the messed up one for my opinion

you look like a human and a bat have a Fusion Dance

why does he look like more of a Baratheon then valerian

The MC so stupid it's embarrassing does he not have any kind of knowledge of how the the world of song of Ice and Fire magic work nearly every magic in there that involves blood have sacrifices involved in it and what about the wars that will come in the future is he going to still resist of killing anyone because at this point if he decides to kill he will be a hypocrite and anyways I think I'm done with this fanfiction I think the MC is confused because I think he doesn't know where he is and who he is because he's personality doesn't sit well with the world he is in the mc just look like the most stupidest man ever if I were him and I knew I was going to end up in that world I will already try to change my mindset to be suited well to that world because if I don't I'll probably going to die without even reaching Adult hood

how the f*** 🤬did you lose 5,000 gold dragons that he put away in to the iron bank 🤔

no going by his situation in this character he's more of a black Peter Parker nearly everything about him is like Peter Parker his personality his personal life and he's Superior intelligence yes he is a black Peter Parker

I will just say one thing I hate the MC then the original he is the worst and I hope he dies a painful death that's how much I hate him