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this has got to be one of the best HP fan fics I have ever read. the story starts off a bit odd but stick with it because after the first couple of pages it really comes together and starts to take off. I love this story and can't wait to read more.

really.... after all the build up and planning and scheming and who knows what else and he makes an enemy out of knull plus no animagus form now. unless you plan on something really stupid to get him out of this I'm sooo gd confused.

just saying... magical powers, knowledge across time, wandless, about to go to magic school, plotting to take over... etc........ is worried bout satellite tv? lol that is so weird. I mean everyone has got to relax and I get that but lol really worried about the food network. so weird

please 🙏 a magical oath that he didn't have anything to do with this publicly for one is easy and obviously since he didn't put his name in, the contract wouldn't bind to him.. always thought this was stupid because if you could force/trick people into magical contracts like this, the world would be crazy and people could get away with anything. PS. if this somehow blows up in dumbledores face,would be hilarious just saying.

this is an outstanding book. it has a very different perspective on the story but between the plot, world building, and general characters development.... this is a phenomenal read and I couldn't put it down as soon as I started. if I have any complaints it would be the MC is a bit too neurotic or mad scientist for my taste but even that fits in well with the story maybe tone it down a little when it comes to the females in his life... like mellow some with age and/or marriage, kids etc and I would say perfect book. looking forward to reading more.

great story over all. good intro. great seeing a version of him taking control on his own. only things I Would suggest would be involving him with goblins again sooner rather than later. he needs access to that political power and him being in the tournament should automatically emancipate him, so that should happen sooner. 🤞 keep in coming. like I said great story.

any chance make him less of a wimp. noble houses, death, wars and most powerful wizards in the land and a girl he's sleeping with sneezes at him and he becomes a wimp .... ... please. it's so annoying

good story and so far it's looking like Luna lovegood will be the romantic interest with a small maybe on Hermione Granger but hope not. LoL find out soon I hope

I'm about a hundred pages into the story so far and i can really see what he means. at first things were more interesting but now it's Hermione every other thing. especially after strike #3 I thought things would change. and I've really been hoping that Daphne would get into more interesting parts to play. she almost seems like a perfect partner for him..... i hope things change. more Daphne less Hermione .... please

this is a weirdly short odd and almost perfect short story that is just fun for that quick read. go for it