Domoora

overall I think this is a good read with a bit of a rushed ending but it's not too bad. apparently it links with other works but you don't need to read them. I like the mc overall and am glad to have read this.

enjoyable enough book overall. a little rushed but i enjoyed it.

you know it would be nice to see him changing things for the better changing fates and what have you.

you know it would have been a little funny if he got hit by that truck.

good overall a little sad the author got sick of it but it is what it is. enjoyable enough to recommend.

this is genuinely so good. I don't have much else to say I love reading this.

I Think the idea of the story is pretty good and I loved the parts focusing on the world evolution. if i can give any advice I'd say fights could be better written. they often focus on others and honestly I don't think we need to see others reactions because it becomes just "oh no it's bad then mc pulls it through and they can believe it but it's sorta rinse and repeat". but I do love that there is just tech vs all this supernatural and magic. it sorta reminds me of Warhammer a little bit. i hope you the best.

I'll be honest this is the chapter that lost me. I just kinda hate all the characters.

Honestly a very good novel is always a joy to read I wish there was more like this.

hey that's totally fair and I do think you're a good writer It just got a little much for me. I'll try and check out your other works