King_Joshua_Curato

The story is great. The drama is there. Tragedy is there. It keeps you wanting to read and at the same time you dont. Not because its badly written, its just that it feels like the protagonist is barely hanging on and seem irredeemable with boiling wrath but no means. No money, no knowledge, it feels like torture. To top it off, theres a suspected transmigrator. Would you look at that? Why not the MC right? And the ralts even has problems or possibly talents unearthed but at present could only be a liability. Authors seems like to make this as a tragedy focused fic, and the few reads were good but heavy to read.

When next updates?

No updates :(

Such a scam

If you cant even finish your fanfic, why do you expect us to believe you can finish your originals? In fanfic, the elements are already there. All you have to do is do the story plot and characters. Originals are much harder because you start from the basics. You cant even arrive to at least 70-100 chapters of this and now youre using this to advertise your originals whod probably flunk just because you dont feel like it anymore. Stop wasting time

This story is ass. The plot itself is ass. Mc gets stronger the more wives and children he has? Thats trash. Thats trouble in the making. I dont know what kind of grass the author smoked to have an idea like this.

This is so stupid. The kids only 2 and the first thing you do when you see a kid with powers like that is not to treat them like an adult. Maybe be more excited and treat him as a genius. Aura gives off intent. The girls not psychic. Why are you making it so that the girl finds it so fishy. Thats a 2 yr old kid.

Ehh youre just forcing situations to MC everytime he gets out of the tower. Convos are also dry and feels like talking to a robot.

Thanks for the chap. Mc's reflection there about his mistakes was good too. Ughh yeah I hope you dont go trying to be a hero all of a sudden mc.

Author I hope this isnt some last ditch effort just to get stones or something like what you did with your other novel the lazy new life. You promised to revamp that one and 3 months later, still nothing. Gonna be disappointing tho this was a real good fanfic.