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lol r u using ai to extent chapters? last couple of chapters were 99% ai

yea I was just mad about every ff having third rate romance bs and wanted the story to focus on the main theme. but looking back this fanfiction rlly sucked and I stopped reading it long long time ago. it follows canon whitewash the 3rd hokage and doesnt change any of the regrets that happened.

nope, the canon never ever told how they ''changed'' the hyuga. on the 4th ninja war hiashi claimed that the hyuga is already ''changed'' yet the caged bird seal was still there. evidence being there on nejis forehead during the 10 tail fight. so idk what ''changed'' but its just bs to wrap the hyuga arc. in my opinion its just a transfer from a field nihha to a house nihha. if you know you know

lool

real canon event

LMAO. first this event is canon. second he 100% holds hatred to the main branch. the only reason he ''sacrificed himself'' is bcs there is rlly no choice and he gave up to fate and to protect neji. he even wrote a letter to neji saying he did it voluntarily lmao so neji doesnt hold hatred. no human being whether in real life or fiction can accept slavery. no matter how flowery the description is.

its not random check her info on wiki :))

author I really mean this in a respectful way. you show jerk one out before you start writing. you going around and around to force it is lowering the quality of the novel alot. he was 15 suddenly he is looking 18 bcs of the potions lol. she is 14 suddenly she is 17. who even wants to read this subplot lol

but not calling me a liar are you though lol. just keep translating this wet daydreaming slop

couldnt go past the 1st chapter. bro got a system all ninja experience high chakra ms sharingan and a scroll to transfer all his clan members in less than 1k words. legit just wishfullfillment trash slop