IamValenci

Did any gacha's happen in op world? also how did he get the dog?

The way MC forces themselves within the plot in my eyes is not smart yes I know they are written to be a fan, but it just seems she just lacks the intelligence to do her own thing. In comparison, I like that the author did give the MC a different symbiote than Venom good job on that. Though this story is only 39 chapters in I do hope when i come back to it the author can improve.

This story is a harem and like most stories that involve harem the quality of what is written deteriorates. Though I wish it could become better I doubt it ever will.

One of the best fanfiction stories I've ever read HolyJoker I wish you would come back, I miss your writing nobody can really compare to your style when it comes to avatar.

in the real-life incident, the men in the village preferred the orangutan over the women in the brothel.

Yang

Weiss

Blake

Ruby

Lione