Sajid_Hussain_7831

it will suit better for character image.

you are right about that.

I like the writing style of this author , good story pacing and all the characters also has a some kind of real. the romance develop very slow pace but i like this more than othe novel first few chapter become lover type.

i think it is better there is no emotional system,otherwise i might think someone is manipulating mc for something grand.

you're right about that like poem writing.

i think you are right.

the story is to cliche like mob caracter all around and mc is arrogant over the top not like some reserve mc he is like some idiot who get power out of nowhere, the story writing style is also meaningless chit chat, questioning heaven in front of citizens and all , it is like child getting power and doesn't no how to use and there is not even a single intelligent being in this story.

i know some of you think it is bad writing but i think it is ok, because ther is so much element , concept, law and programing thing and that, the author much have gone bald, if he doesn't make some mistake. alright continue writing please author.

you should read the myth the ruler of spirituality first if you want to make your god real like.

I think the mc is to nice for her good and always interval in small matter. there is nothing like god in this