Orange kun- hypocrite certified ✓✓✓

A bit of hypocrite->Orange kun.

atleast you can use grammerly ..that will reduce your mistakes

Bro your English is on different level of pathetic... it's even worse than machine translation 🙂hope you improve

U hv my best wishes and hope u improve alot...🎈

why?

I don't know what to say... your way of writing style is just too bland... i mean atleast for me... I don't think i would be able to read past this chapter.I would just say gow I felt...it was boring... and i couldn't drive my self to read past this...i wish u best author... try to be more....idk just dont'tbe just this bland... man

bring up the** bad memories

the ritual neared** completion

was** second to none

they were**

croaks= die

I might be wrong but that should be ... considering

knew**