Great chapter, I really liked it. It's understandable that you didn't like some parts and it's appreciated, but it took you 1 week to publish, but it's still a great chapter, and it's a lot to ask for, but 2 chapters per week would be appreciated.
Update every 2 days that sounds great I loved the story when I read chapter 1 but I was desperate when I saw that 20 days had already passed but thank you please continue Updates [img=Feeling it]