Artos_Kensington

thank you for reading it and I'm glad you enjoyed it. though I will say somewhat sadly, but also hopefully that I actually switched over to Royal road and I'm currently going over and re- editing all of the chapters and I believe they have been slightly improved. now it's nothing major so you don't have to reread it and not all the chapters are done being re-edited on that one as I'm doing that right now. I just finished uploading chapter 10 but I have gone back and made them better at least in my opinion adding a bit more to the chapters as well. give or take a few sentences or paragraphs and cleaning up a few moments. but very glad you enjoyed. hope to see you enjoy even more

ArtosTK

duly noted. when I try to write things out I end up rambling on for a few things but grammarly does a decent job on rephrasing it. but then I feel like it takes a lot out so then I'll try to fit it back in But then I guess it does make it a bit repetitive try to keep in mind what the audience will remember for how many times I try to put it in a chapter. but thank you for the CC.

OK, I just read the next few chapters and I have no idea what’s happening because you probably skipped a few chapters or put them in the wrong order when you’re posting half of the chapter all the time and based off the title of this chapter I feel like you accidentally put another chapter instead of this one because I have no idea what’s going on in the next few chapterslike I missed like four or so chapters

You need to rename this chapter because there is no mention or even build up to the Crown princess arriving. I get that you have to make a lot of chapters and I think it’s 1500 words per day to keep the contract or something but dude these chapters are half released and we’re paying full price.

Yeah, I usually very much enjoy how detailed than in depth you get with all the technology and stuff like that but this chapter was actually insane. I think there was zero maybe like 2% of additional content in story and the rest of the history lesson and though I do find it fascinating, the difference of iron and steel with the chemical and impurities of other elements, but I find more interesting is the actual story of how that is used and incorporated and though the backdrop and background for that information is very much useful to know in accordance to how Joseph is implementing these actions earlier especially for France and the industrial revolution kickstart. I would very much appreciate that if I am paying well over $100 to continue reading the story that every chapter at least somewhathas some additional story content, not just a deep dive into a singular aspect of a singular aspect of a singular part of one of Joseph’s plans, including material material besides that great chapter for sure for a history lesson but not a great chapter for additional content that I’m paying for

he definitely won’t marry her, but that doesn’t mean things, Can’t get a bit mature later on We all know how emotional having a hostage or being a hostage or being in a trade, negotiation or pawn in a war can get. Especially when one is a king, a prince or a princess in a magical medieval, setting with love and deceit Also, especially for Myrcella Rob will be a lot nicer than Jeffrey, or anyone in Kings Landing ever was, and considering his character is turning in to more of a hero of legend, he’ll be quite the catch though. Nothing will probably happen for a few more years. At least with Myrcella as she is too young but considering she will be a hostage in Winterfell. She will be hearing nothing, but good things and stories about Robb.

Glad you liked it and hope you like the latest chapter. Sorry about it being so late.

yes, so at the start. He had very slight cold resistance, as well as a slight boost to his strength,agility and dexterit as well as a boost in his growth though once he met, change the old child of the forest, who was born again from an old root to signify Rob changing the old story in the old fates to a new one, with his presence and actions, he reignited a magic and further in the old gods, like, for example, the same thing with the red comment signifying. That magic is returning back tothe land but Rob is becoming Aiken to one of the heroes of old or legends, like land, the clever or garland, green hand or brand the builder so he’s like really igniting the bloodline for himself, anyway, which comes with an extended essence of life, basically for him, Self, like he’s not gonna be casting any magic or anything, besides his waging though, will be easier for him to do, so also, his height will continue to go up as well as his strength, and he also has an extended lifespan that truly become a the main hero of the time period to eventually combat. What is coming from the east if that makes any sense at all to you. Also, sorry for the word vomit. I’m on my phone right now, so I’m just using voice to text, but I hope I at least somewhat explained it to you.

I'm not there yet, but I'm working on it. I just need to review it, and hopefully, I'll finish the drafts I have after as well. I've just been super busy with work I'm trying to not post or review tired as the last couple of chapters had a few easily available for mistakes of repeat paragraphs, but I want to get at least three out this upcoming week But thank you for your review and your support