Medraawd

That sounds funny coming from a ninja.

That would make sense, yeah. Thanks for checking it out.

Eh, this is quickly becoming a Pokémon fic

A puny godking? A creation god might barely match the jade beauty

I wonder. I read somewhere that Soul Douluo have a chance of noticing transformed soul beasts, if they focus enough, while Titled Douluo will always notice them. I don’t know if this is accurate…

Didn’t exactly give him an option, did you? Stop pretending you care

There isn’t much to say. The original fanfic is probably fine, but this translation is completely botched. If the translator wants to use AI, I won’t hold it against them as long as they at least bother to edit it properly. Instead, what we have is a story that was butchered by AI, with various examples of discontinuity between chapters. In one chapter a character would state something, only for the chapter to end and it be repeated in the next one or for something completely different to happen. This issue isn’t so obvious in the early chapters, but I noticed it becoming more and more common down the line. All in all, I can’t recommend this translation.

… Are you a dog?

Uh, even threatening to hit your student like that is already wrong lol