Same

I am really glad that you are continuing the novel thanks

Thx for the cappy

I really love the way you portray there emotions especially asariah it feels tangible and realistic the interactions.

Hey just checking up on this novel it has potential i am not trying to rush you but I hope you don’t drop it

One of the things i like is the vocabulary you use to describe stuff

Thanks for the chapter after a while

I am not a big fan of the part where he talks to the imaginary readers but as long as its not over used it can be good. Also i like how poe challenges the vikings idea of revenge

I really like how it shows his sense of alienation that he feels from being in a different world and a different body. The way you describe him makes him seem so real.

I really enjoyed the story but i hope you will come back

I really like how it shows his internal crisis

This entire chapter is gold it brings a broader perspective on the transmigration narrative. And i like that someone in the novel is able to know that he is being controlled by something higher.

So far the story has good potential the only gripe i have is that how would a knight that is trained to protect and kill if needed be scared of a vampire child

Honestly great execution it was short but you can really see the emotion

Arc Angels

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