This is not bad for your first novel, seems interesting so far

Bruh, you really need to know what past tense is and not to mix it with present tense. Your best bet is using Grammerly to fix up your grammar.

Bruh, this guy really just offed his grandma 💀💀

Yeah, I’d avoid reading this fic like the plague.. The story started off good, than became utter garbage due to MC’s personality and thought process. In other words, the MC is a forgetful idiot.. I’m not gunna even mention the issues with the Author’s grammar.. all in all, this is a terrible fanfic.

The Author stole this book and changed the name of the MC. How unoriginal; It’s authors like you who ruin this app…

This FF is just tooooooo good! Give it a try, you’ be surprised!

Give it a try, pretty good ngl.