it was a good read very interesting. I gave it a 3.4 because I was a little confused. you need develop your world background and story development a little more. It was hard for me to understand what type of world they were in and what kind of story was going on.
I always like a good Chinese martial arts book and drama. The story is really good I will say however that it's a little too much detailed in the first chapter. You should spread the details and plots more evenly through the chapter's.