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Velstad9dReplied to Novachronos_Even with the help of the Nine, Talon is fighting with a crumbling body that feels intense pain, and because he is not even yellow rated, his body is not able to handle the full extent of the gift's that the Nine lend him. And for Vincent, there is more about him, but I have plans for him.
Ch 117 Creature of Darkness- Velstad11dCommentedThe man in the tube was not overly handsome like his main body was and nor did he have smooth skin. Instead, he had a medium height, had a few burn scars on his body, and an average looking face. The only area in which the avatar beat his main body was in the amount of muscle mass that it had.
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thick?
'I swear... I felt something there...', he thought to himself as he stroked his long white beard and turned to look back a the man who was in front of him but to his surprise, he couldn't see him there anymore. Instead, a dirty looking man stood in front with think black animal fur covering his private area. - Velstad13dReplied to GodlyFlextape
Good riddance!'
Meaning, he could even clearly perceive the things happening above him as well as underground. Within the Sphere of Resonance, nothing could escape his senses. Even the most minute changes would be immediately noticed by him. - Velstad17dCommentedHis movements resembled an individual who had done this over a million times.
- Velstad17dCommentedHe molded bread, slammed meat, seasoned, cut, cooked, and everything else you do in a kitchen!
- Velstad18dReplied to Novachronos_Ch 90 Down With The Priest (2)
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I messed up, Talon is Number Nine
'You are brave number one, I have to give you that…' Number Eight stopped for a moment, every single moment he spent in silence felt like a dagger across Talon's throat as he feared his response… those fears came true. - Velstad18dReplied to Novachronos_
Yes, I fix it right away, thank you for pointing it out
"What are you crying about, a beer here only cost about four silver." Stated Rokara matter of factly which only managed to scare Talon even more. "Four copper?! Thats too much to pay for a beer, are you out of your damn mind?!" - Velstad18dReplied to Novachronos_
Yes it's Lance I apologize
The rest of the huntsmen didn't share Striker's rage. Archer wore a look of guilt on her face, while Lane regarded Striker with disdain. - Velstad19dReplied to Novachronos_
And you don't even know how thankful I really am. Now that my first volume finally ended, I wanted to reedit the volume, while I was writing it, I learned a lot of different things about writing, and I want my book to be as enjoyable as possible. Thank you for reading, hope you enjoy!
This paragraph has been deleted. - Velstad19dReplied to Novachronos_
He, I apologize if it's not clear enough, I try to fix it
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Thank you so much, I fix it right away. I apologize for the grammatical errors, I'm still trying my best to learn
This paragraph has been deleted. - Velstad29dCommentedCh 1 The Cheating Couple
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Nikolai went full John Wick
Hearing the familiar name, Riddick also showed some flicker of sadness in his eyes, but his tone and posture didn't change. "I'm surprised you went that far for a dog. But that's probably not how you saw it I suppose." - Velstad1mthCommentedCh 1 Eternal Cultivation
- Velstad1mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Transmigration
- Velstad1mthCommentedCh 1 1 — Arrested ?
- Velstad1mthCommented"Order 69 is ready!" The receptionist shouted.